I'm still slogging my way through a latest revision of Sentinel. A fellow critiquer gave me a way to "cut to the chase" as it were--align all the protags' and antags' goals and give them a reason to stay together despite their lack of trust. I watched Blood Diamond last night and learned that at least their goals should lay in the same direction, if they aren't actually the same goal. I should lose about five-ten thousand words in the process, which is a goal.
Other than that it's a boring weekend at Casa Sex. Can't find a babysitter, no lake or snowboarding, little blog-o-rama action. Jebus on a raft, next thing you know I'll be cleaning house or going to the fucking mall.
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